Dead
Man’s Path
Want
kids to have a good Education.
Different
areas.
Kids
are good.
They
speak different languages.
Same
The
school districts want the kids to do good.
They
both have problems in the schools that they have to get through.
They
both have a garden.
They
both play schools.
Running
Wild
Mainly
about football.
They
are both in different areas.
Kids
are bad.
They
speak different languages.
I think (in my opinion) that you should use more rhyming words in your poem.
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